Narrative survey

Please read the following dialogue and answer a couple of questions after that.

This specific dialogue is not connected to any game that has been released or is currently in development, but your response will help us sharpen our approach to narrative in the future.
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*A castle tower. A warrior in ancient armor approaches the sleeping bard*
Veteran: “Arise, young squire, for the hour of battle is at hand! The khaganate is at the gate. Do you not hear the singing of their horns?”
Animation: *the bard rolls over*
Veteran: “How far the noble have fallen. Arise, young squire! Or have you forgotten your oath?”
Judd: “I owe you nothing. Leave me be. Get lost.”
Animation: *the warrior approaches, looming over the resting bard*
Veteran: “The blood of Prince Hendar shall be on your hands. How can you gaze in the mirror and not be weighed down by your betrayal?”
Judd: “He’s long gone, and so is his kingdom. Let me get some sleep, you wretched phantom!”
Animation: *the warrior looks at his hands and realizes they are translucent*
Veteran: “How… how could this have come to pass?”
Animation: *the bard sighs and sits up*
Judd: “Fine, listen. After King Hendar II was slain, Prince Hendar III succeeded him, but he didn’t last a year on the throne.”.
Judd: “The capital was sacked, and the kingdom was no more. Two hundred years have passed since then, and there you have it.”
Veteran: “This could not… cannot be. Do you not hear the singing of the horns, young squire?”
Animation: *the bard collapses back onto the bed and covers his ears with a pillow*
Judd: “Why did I ever study to become a spirit medium? I’d do anything for a good night’s sleep…”
1.How would you rate the flow of the dialogue? Is it easy to read and follow the characters' thoughts?
Please rate from 1 to 5, where 1 is very hard to read and 5 is very easy to read:
1 - very hard to read
2 - somewhat hard to read
3 - neither easy nor hard
4 - somewhat easy to read
5 - very easy to read
2.How well the characters are portrayed? Please rate from 1 to 5, where 1 is the characters are poorly portrayed and 5 is the characters are well portrayed:
1 - the characters are poorly portrayed
2 - the characters are somewhat poorly portrayed
3 - neither poorly portrayed nor well portrayed
4 - the characters are somewhat well portrayed
5 - the characters are well portrayed
3.Is it clear enough what this dialogue was about?
Please rate from 1 to 5, where 1 is it is absolutely unclear what the dialogue is about and 5 is it is very clear what the dialogue is about.
1 - it is absolutely unclear what the dialogue is about
2 - it is somewhat unclear
3 - neither clear nor unclear
4 - it is somewhat clear
5 - it is very clear what the dialogue is about
4.How much did you like the dialogue in general? Please rate from 1 to 5, where 1 is I didn’t like it at all and 5 is I liked it a lot.
1 - I didn’t like it at all
2 - I somewhat disliked it
3 - I neither like it nor disliked it
4 - I somewhat liked it
5 - I liked it a lot