Reader Feedback for Rough Draft of the Voyage of the Valiant: Breakaway Chapter 02 |
Instructions
Thank you for reading this rough draft manuscript. Your feedback is priceless to the author. Because you are reading this episode, you are being asked to critique this project.
The questions below are to guide you in your critique. Your answers help the author tell the best story possible. Please read through the questions twice and then put them aside until you are finished with the manuscript. Keep the questions in mind as you read.
Please do not share this manuscript with anyone without the author’s permission.
The #1 RULE- If you are not enjoying the story and looking forward to the next episode, STOP! If you have to make yourself read at any point, don’t. Please let me know where you stopped in your answers below.
Number 2 RULE- Be honest with your answers.